30 second story

Hi Team,

Here is my new 30 second story. Will work on finessing it this week, but here’s a start.

I used to be a high paid professional in the corporate world.

Then I got laid off after 19 years with the same company.

Now I’m an entrepreneur with a company in the growing market of Health and Wellness.

AND I’m building a team of like minded people who want to escape the 9-5 world and create a better future for themselves and others.

I’m looking for people who want to get healthy and I’m looking for people who are concerned about their financial future.

Who comes to mind that may want to hear about what we’re doing?

OR Does that sound like you or someone you know?

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2 comments to 30 second story

  • Monica

    I have already worked on improving this – here is new take.
    I used to be a high paid professional in the corporate world.
    Then I got laid off after 19 years with the same company.
    Now I’m an entrepreneur with a company in the growing international Health and Wellness market.
    AND I’m building a team of like minded people who want to escape the 9-5 world and create a sustainable income that no one can ever take away.
    I’m looking for people who want to get healthy and I’m looking for people who are concerned about their financial future.
    Who comes to mind who may want to hear about this opportunity to get healthy and to create generational wealth.
    OPTION
    I’m also looking for people with contacts in Asia as Shaklee and my business are expanding into China.

  • Monica

    Here’s another take on my 30 second story.
    Ten years ago I started using some nutritional supplements and I found that I felt better, had more energy and didn’t get sick anymore. When I got laid off from my corporate job 6 years ago I became an entrepreneur with the company because I wanted to bring these same health benefits to other people and create an income that noone could take away from me. Now I’m building a team of like minded people who want to live a long and healthy life and have enough money to last as long as they do. Who comes to mind that may want to hear more about what I do?

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